Incredible You

i made this poem for my best friend i just never got the nerve to tell her how much see means to me so this is for you

everybody has an incredible you

it dosnt have to be a

boyfriend or girlfriend

it dosnt have to be a

husband or wife

it dosnt have to be

someone you have a crush on

so if i asked you to read this poem

its cause you are my

one and only

incredible you

 

it was your first day of school

but only for you

you switched schools

and that was cool

i know i told you this before

that when i saw you from a peak

i thought you were a freak

i knew that when i saw you

there was just something about you

it took me a while

i dont know how

but i know now

you werent a freak

you were my

incredible you

 

you listen to my problems

and tell me how to solve them

you motitave me

with things i hate

i should get you a crown

for never letting me down

that is why

your my

incredible you

 

i dont have the nerve

to tell you in person

so as i remember

all of the good times

we had together

i will write this down

to show you how much

you mean to me

cause your my

incredible you

 

we made a promise from the start

to say that we will never grow apart

if we do

then my world will come

crashing down

because your my

incredible you

 

your always there for me

now ill be there for you

why you may ask

ill look at you and say

its cause your my

incredible you

 

i feel as if i havent said it enough

so once more i will say

no matter what you do or say

you will forever and always be

my one and only

incredible you

Reviews

[Grace Catherine C.]

omg so I just realized that one of the kittens is blonde, so that has to be me so I can be represented by my future blonde kitten named Arthur. lol

[Short.Nerd]

I love it! Great job:)

[penchantpoet]

Julie!
I love the idea behind this piece and the title in particular. Please just do a spell check as it deters from the message!
Thanks
PP

[Voice]

This is something very nice to write to someone. Sweet write!! :)

Voice

[Alexa Tasch]

oh how sweet. it is even sweeter cuz i know you in person!!!

[A.A.Romanczuk]

This is adorable...really sweet...

[Grace Catherine C.]

AWWWWWH, ur incredible too julie, thanx!

[Hannah Paige]

awhh this was really cute. it made me smile