Fade Away

ok so this is my first poem its short but i wrote it for all of those people who can feel sad at times but dont want to show it please let me know what you think of it

people look at you

and they see what you want them to see

are you happy

are you sad

or are you hiding behind a mask

nothing can last forever though

so what happens when that mask starts to break

how bad will you fall apart

can you pick up the pieces

or do you leave them

till they fade away

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Loving your first poem, flows so well:)

[Dalebear]

I admit I am one of them to I feel mostly sad
Great write

Dalebear

[Voice]

I will admit to being one of those people. Great write!!

Voice

[A.A.Romanczuk]

I think it's great...it's ..the truth...people see what You want them to see...depending on how good of an actor You are ...I like it
:)

[Katt Marie]

julie its sooo beautiful

[EvilAngel]

that's actually really funny cuz i was gono write a poem like this and i thought it was unmasking myself too much.now you've inspired me

[Grace Catherine C.]

Aw, Julie Beth it's so sad, I like it though.