Senryu

Haiku

 

They appear to sleep

Limbs askew on the stiff street

Still, blanket covered

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

This is actually a senryu, and it is a really good one.
"stiff street" limbs askew"
bodies lying for all to see as the war rages on.
So damn sad what is happening.
j.

[Mike Keenan]

I just learned something. Thanks J.