I Want To Tell You Everything

It just popped up in my head and poof! Here it is!

I want to tell you everything

I am just not sure how

to tell you how it felt

when I looked in to those eyes

It was as if  thousands of stars

were shining right before me,

bringing me to a place I never knew,

making me forget everything

Everything

Making me forget 

what is wrong

and what is right

My senses blurred

upon being touched

by such a person,

driving me mad,

making me want for more

More

More!

And still here I am

I cannot find the words

my dear, to tell you

the feeling of ecstasy

in finding someone new

Author's Note

Hey guys! Feel free to review my work. Tell me what do you think of it, if I made any mistakes or what should I do about it. Thank you!

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Its beautifully written, with rising emotions. Also gives it a singing tone while reading.

[Glorienne Broñola]

Thank you for taking time to read and review my poem. It makes me feel good that I made something "beautifully written". The idea just popped out of nowhere while I was eating dinner and I didn't expect it to be described as such. Thank you very much!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

What we think is just an idea, is sometimes more than what we think. Also I think random thoughts are the best described without planning. The pleasure was mine ☺