Never Caught My Breath

stop asking questions

I swear this, I'm okay

stop asking questions

it's an average price to pay

 

stop asking questions

I never shed a tear

stop asking questions

death I never fear

stop asking questions

these scars I cannot hide

stop asking questions

there's millions more inside

Reviews

[Gone]

I can feel the pain in your poem. It is well structured and concise but it is only in the last line you really begin to outlet your pain. I would encourage you to use the written word to express the pain itself. Not as some kind of miricle cure, but as a means of venting it. It will also produce some excellent poetry.