Miles Defined Us

I could have loved you forever

Given the choice,

I could have listened to the beating of your heart

Patter into a rhythmic lullaby

Every night Laid beside you

 

I would have given you the world

If you would have seen it with me

Sadly, our scenery will change

As will your heart

 

As will mine

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Love is difficult. Need two people with the same need in the same place. I liked Donne logic. "You do not find love, love find you." I understand this poem. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Ted Kniffen]

Beautifully written p&k. A lovely bit about a relational break-up that says all anyone would need to know about the scars that are laid down and dealt with.

Good write.

[poison&kerosene]

Thank you! I am going through a rough transition and writing is the only thing I can do to ease my soul. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work :)

[Ted Kniffen]

I went through a similar situation some 50 years ago now. The writing definitely helps.