Snow Day Lovers

A snowflake promenade above our heads

We watch them sway into descent

They meet as one atop the ground

We follow suit and fall unbound

Cheek to cheek, a roseate flush

Bitten by winter’s wicked touch

We pay no mind to blistering cold

As the fire in our hearts melts us whole

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

This is time well spent on snow days! The warmth is even more special on the coldest days, when everything feels remote and unsettling. Another good poem.

[poison&kerosene]

Thank you kindly :)

[R.E. Ray]

You’re welcome.

[Ted Kniffen]

I picture two lovers on a snowy eve disregarding the cold, falling backward hand in hand to make snow angels.
The flush of love keeping them warm.

Well done p&k

[poison&kerosene]

A review even better than the poem :) Thank you!

[CLR9]

I love snow. i come from a snowy place. Very cool poem, cool an unintended pun, hehe.

[poison&kerosene]

I do as well! It is very magical unless you have to drive in it :) Thank you!

[Ralph Proenza (Docralph..]

"As the fire in our hearts melts us whole"... Yes, that fire of LOVE between two people is like no other! Good inciteful writing, p & k.

[poison&kerosene]

Thank you for your kind words!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i can feel the two lovers melting into each other...the voyeur icicles dripping with envy.
j.

[poison&kerosene]

"voyeur icicles dripping with envy". I love that!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

The fire & cold all together. As the fire in our hearts melts us whole so true...