Tales of a Disrespected Waitress

I may be small
and my words are few
but what makes me
less than you?
I make minimum wage
My Sundays are free
I have yet to earn
a college degree
I was taught well
always show courtesy
The world is merciless
so always have mercy
I cannot see a halo
only your high horse
Still you belittle me
with zero remorse
We are both human
and you hurt too
So what makes me
less than you?

Reviews

[Ralph Proenza (Docralph..]

Your words in “Tales...” show a wonderful perspective. I have observed human behavior for years and see a common thread: everyone sees life through their own ‘colored filters.” These filters are usually flawed, and are colored by millions of factors (experiences, upbringing, situation, etc. a.k.a. “Baggage”). Even as I write, I know I’m using my ‘own’ filters! Some of these negative ‘reviewers’ reflect these same phenomena. You represent a refreshing breeze, a sweet flower, in a field that can sometimes be desolate and depressing. Thank you, p & k for being such a flower 🌸. -Ralph

[poison&kerosene]

Yes! We can really only view life through our own prism. Even attempting to see things through other's eyes can be a challenge. I can try to see things through the perspective of someone bitter and negative much like the previous negative reviewer, but my ability will always be skewed by my own vision. Thank you for your kind words. It truly made my day!

[Levi Levin]

The attitude of some people are definitely portrayed here. Many in this life think they are better than the rest of the world. I don't enjoy being around people like this very long. Simple people inspire me the most. Great job!!

[poison&kerosene]

I would have to agree with you sir. Negativity is draining for both parties unfortunately. Thank you sir!

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome:)

[Mr. D]

If you put yourself in a situation where your self-worth is determined by other people, you're doing yourself a sore disservice. It's also your own fault. Sometimes.

[poison&kerosene]

You are interpreting this poem's intent incorrectly. It is not about my self worth as a reflection of other people. It is about the attitude that some people put forth. They want to make you lower than themselves. It is simply me putting forth the question to them. What about you makes you believe you are better than me?

[poison&kerosene]

You are making a lot of assumptions about me. I don't change for others or seek their praise to validate myself.

[Mr. D]

*shrug* I just gave a review.

[poison&kerosene]

The part that I took issue with was that you gave a review on what you perceived as my character. Not my writing. I don't disagree with what you said. I just want you to understand that your words don't actually represent myself or the poem is all.

[Mr. D]

People are all the same. They just haven't realized it yet...but I have, and this is where my attitude stems from.

But fair enough.

[Samuel Dickens]

Excellent. I always root for the little person, having been one myself. Almost all of us work low paying jobs until we can find something better. People who abuse and belittle others are lousy bums, in my opinion. Not only does this poem issue a clear and meaningful message, but it is constructed with great rhymes and rhythm.

[poison&kerosene]

I wrote this 5 years ago. I now have my degree and I have a wonderful job. My years in the service industry has definitely helped me to become a lot more patient and compassionate. I believe everyone should work these kinds of jobs at least once in their lives. Definitely would make the world a lot more of an understanding place! Thank you for your kind words!

[terry smith]

nothing!!! nicely written!! we all are born and we all die....

[poison&kerosene]

I know that I am 4 years late but thank you for taking the time to read my writing and for your kind words!