Forevermore to Nevermore

I find myself in an empty room

The world is quiet and I have to go

To leave this space forevermore

To enter a place of nevermore

With fields of green and purple 

Lilacs bouncing on the breast

Of swirling winds and honey airs

To Rainbow skys abound

Forget the shackles of the here 

Unto Earth 

A prison I shan't bear

Take unto me a holy air

And as I rise into the sky

Away from all that pass me by 

I fondly leave and do not cry

For celestial arms welcome me 

By and by

To Warmth of heart and settled mind

Of which I've never known in kind

Never again shall I go back 

To my world of past so black

For in this world shall never be

My keenly felt conformity

My body in white walls abhorred

Left behind while my spirit soared

No binds on that, no puckered skin

No rejection as it is forced in

No games to play with white lab coats

No pain rising through my throat

Now as I lay in cloudy arms

My eyes glassed over and my heartbeat gone

My limbs are unstrapped and I know I've won

As the fires take both on beyond 

Reviews

[alegria]

dark and deep but very lovely piece of write :) keep writing :)

[Nath]

I really like this.
We all feel like our life is a burden rather than a gift at times. Don't we all enjoy dreaming of liberation from the chains?
You've penned this strife beautifully. Great job!

[Cyndi Goodgame]

Dark and lovely. I loved it.

[Blue Ivory]

Deep and dark. I like your implications here. As in, the way you deliver your message is really nice. It is a common feeling to want to end life. You've written it nicely.

[koty bell]

Excellent... Splendid work.. Profound and very deep:) awesome job:)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

not only the thoughts were superb but the rhyming was excellent too...

[Adam M. Snow]

Wow, a thought evoking piece. I enjoyed this one so much, thanks for sharing.

[Eddie Phillips]

It evokes a sense of dreaming. I loved the whimsical play at words and the ethereal feel of your words. It was a masterpiece.

[Quoting Ravens]

I love the afterlife-like feel.