Issac Neuton

A poem about Isaac Neuton

 

 

 

Newty, Newty

Clonk on conk

Motions made you clumsy

Tick, tock

Distance

Go together

Watch that marble roll

Drop an apple

Drop a feather

One day help

Predict the weather

Newty, Newty

In a book

Students, Students

Look, Look, Look

He made some laws

Because his noggin

Shook

 

© 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr.  All rights reserved

 

Reviews

[Pól]

clever, funny + good meter + flow
Is the mis~spelling of Newton deliberate?~ I,m prob missing a joke
Well done + thanks for sharing

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

I made it a pun off the neuton to make it more serious yet at the same time completely make fun of the whole thing I was trying to be punny and quirky

[That_Girl]

Haha how clever! Love it!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Im glad you liked it!!

[Nina St. Moritz]

I loved this piece! Brings Newton down to our level. XD Nicely done. The poem flows well, makes it memorable.
Keep up the good work,
C. d'Argent

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thanx so much Shristine Im glad you liked it and Im really glad ull remeber it

[Alexa Tasch]

I wish they used this in science class, it'd be much more interesting! Great poem!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

I showed this to my physics teacher and she just started cracking up

[Alexa Tasch]

I would too if I were her!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

:-D lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Emily this was fun! it made me laugh in the way it caricatured Sir Isaac. Flows well and is a feel good piece.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thanx!! I was in a silly mood today

[Liderien]

lol...this is great!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thanx so much Im glad you enjoyed it!!!

[Sami Khalil]

I agree . Cute poem...

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx!!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...

[Soul Fire]

Very cute poem

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

I'm glad you like it :-)

[Sky]

I like the misspelling of Newton to Neuton. Right away the title sets up its quirkiness. A fun poem. Nice job.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol im glad you liked it I was a little worried about that part cuz u know how anal some ppl can be about the spelling

[~]

LOL :) Ahhhh....Neuty :) Who knew physics could be so fun! Nice work on this, my friend.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol I was writing poems in physics class and got yelled at but my teacher doesnt care as long as they have to do with physics so I win lol and thanx