Issac Neuton

A poem about Isaac Neuton

 

 

 

Newty, Newty

Clonk on conk

Motions made you clumsy

Tick, tock

Distance

Go together

Watch that marble roll

Drop an apple

Drop a feather

One day help

Predict the weather

Newty, Newty

In a book

Students, Students

Look, Look, Look

He made some laws

Because his noggin

Shook

 

© 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr.  All rights reserved

 

Reviews

[Cameron]

This is absolutely hilarious and very much accurate.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol told ya so! :-P and thank you!

[anxia]

Funny and i like it haha

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Glad it entertained ya lol

[.]

I laughed and smiled, u made me happy! :D A lovable write! 100/100

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

I'm glad I made you happy lol that makes me smile

[.]

:D ur welcome!

[JB Murray]

Definitely brings a smile to one's face. A playful piece indeed!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

I was in a very playful mood :-)

[Corset]

lol, what a cute poem, definitely should be read in a school room :)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

I know right!!! I wish my teacher had lol

[Heromen Selena]

I liked this poem :) Newty Newty. Loved this. Great job.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol thanx!!! :-) I was feeling silly

[Andrew N. Farrens]

This is a very light-hearted poem and it is a refresher from the normal gloom and doom poetry rhymes that I write and many others try to imitate.....Thank-you.....
100/100

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thanx!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it :-) dramatics are all well and good but sometimes you ned to write something light and refreshing or you become to heavy ya know?

[Andrew N. Farrens]

indeed.....

[Yoav Ilan]

Oh, that was a fun read!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

I'm really glad you enjoyed it!! :-)

[JuniperPearl]

What a fun piece! I like all the sound effects, it really gave the poem a life and movement of it's own. Great job!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Im glad you liked it!!! :-)

[James William Dyer]

Dr. Seuss-like. From that perspective I like it, although the tone seems to trivialize Newton. I'd say if you're going to criticize such a genius, I'd go after the fact that he was a functionary on a council that worked for the Inquisition, mixing something serious and disturbing in with a child-like perspective could come off really good.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

well I was going with the perspective thats its cruel to label anyone a genius. by labeling someone a genius you make them unreachable and unrelateable. He was a person a human. Everything in this poem is true. He became a genius because he got hit on the head. Im sure Im not the only one who thinks that fact is funny.

[James William Dyer]

I doubt he became a genius from being hit on the head, that story of the apple is almost certainly apocryphal. And yes, he was a human, but he was also a member of the inquisition, which is actually quite interesting, what a duality to be able to invent calculus and condemn women to be burned all in one head! At any rate, I enjoyed the poem.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

im glad you enjoyed it. if ur so interested about the inquesition why don't you write a poem about it because thats not what this poem is about nor the purpose of it.

[James William Dyer]

lol. temper temper

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

no im serious