A poignant read of how one may indeed receive the attentions of another that are clearly not wanted - and then, that is sexual harassment, no matter how the offender feels about it! Yes, one does struggle, but it is vital to keep alight that precious bright spark and most of all, protect it!!
(just a suggestion.....do you want the phrase "All to much hurt" to be with the word to, or too? I am not sure how you wanted the phrase to read" as it would be spelled the two different ways depending on your meaning of it, and we readers often interpret a writer's work in a different way than it was intended.)
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
I'm glad you liked it!! I wrote it while a teacher was lectuing about the subject. You'r right abo.. read moreI'm glad you liked it!! I wrote it while a teacher was lectuing about the subject. You'r right about the "to" "too" thing I always forget that!
I work in equality law (for my sins) so immediately attracted by the title. I think yoy have captured the essence of the emotions one feels when bullied or subjected to unwanted attention (here of the sexual nature). I hope you didn't actually have to endure this. I like the positive end.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
I'm glad you enjoyed it!! I was bullied rather vicously and some other things but nothing recent so.. read moreI'm glad you enjoyed it!! I was bullied rather vicously and some other things but nothing recent so you shouldnt worry. I think my experiences fuel my writing with emotion so its not all wasted anyhow.
12 Years Ago
Yeah- its a strong person who make a positive from a negative. And writing from one's own experienc.. read moreYeah- its a strong person who make a positive from a negative. And writing from one's own experience is generally best.
A poignant read of how one may indeed receive the attentions of another that are clearly not wanted - and then, that is sexual harassment, no matter how the offender feels about it! Yes, one does struggle, but it is vital to keep alight that precious bright spark and most of all, protect it!!
(just a suggestion.....do you want the phrase "All to much hurt" to be with the word to, or too? I am not sure how you wanted the phrase to read" as it would be spelled the two different ways depending on your meaning of it, and we readers often interpret a writer's work in a different way than it was intended.)
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
I'm glad you liked it!! I wrote it while a teacher was lectuing about the subject. You'r right abo.. read moreI'm glad you liked it!! I wrote it while a teacher was lectuing about the subject. You'r right about the "to" "too" thing I always forget that!
Im just a highschool girl. Writing is my hobby and I think Im fairly good at it but I leave you to be the judge of that. :-)
my best short stories are: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/poisinros.. more..