Strenth

Its a bit short but I like it so give it a read plz :-)

 

 

 

 

As hearts can beat

So can I

Upon the shields and barriers

That make me cry

Reviews

[Andrew N. Farrens]

short but well written

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thats what I go for personally I think the shorter poems carry more power

[S]

Strength....we just need to realize ours

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

always :-)

[Stanley Wilson]

big impact clever write

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol thanx!

[Dr. Wood ?]

It says what it says with great impact...very cleverly done in so short a space

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx so much!

[That_Guy]

This is awesome. Short and sweet. Well done Hannah

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx :-)

[Heather]

I can relate to this...short but keenly felt.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol thanx i know it is awfully short and its not even a haiku or anything but idk i like it enough to wanna post it

[Heather]

its absolutely worth posting!