Strenth

Its a bit short but I like it so give it a read plz :-)

 

 

 

 

As hearts can beat

So can I

Upon the shields and barriers

That make me cry

Reviews

[mayowa]

short and witty. great!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol thanx!! great things can come in small packages ;-)

[Michael Perez]

How do you do it??????? Your short poems have so much power! Great write, I really felt this one! It puzzles me how much you can put clear-cut meaning into a single 4-lined stanza! Consider my mind blown! Keep up the good writes! :D

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx so much! well i cnt say one thing or another will help but I tend to bottle up things a lot so I suppose when I write it simply comes out strongly no matter how little it is and I suppose if it is a small space then I simply have to pound it in more powerfully to make it fit????

[Michael Perez]

Yeah. I perfectly understand. Even how little, it still is very important to express your feelings. :P

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

and poetry is the perfect outlet

[Allycat]

Wow..This poem has such power.. such strength! With so little words, you've expressed everything so beautifully!
Well done! :)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thanx so much! I think that shorter poems are often under-creditted because I think they hold just as much if not more power than their longer counterparts

[Allycat]

No problem :D I agree! Shorter poems tend to hold more meaning and power than most long poems

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

I'm glad u agree and thanx for the review I'm like a review vampire I feed off them lol

[Allycat]

hahaha, my pleasure!

[Hester Vane]

Short and sweet! Great message in such few words! Well done!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thanc so much! I am a strong believer of there being power extreme in few lined scheme.

[lee von cleef]

Great way of making all the lines echo into each other.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thank you so much I'm glad you enjoyed it! I love to leave a certain power and unique perception behing in my writing. :-)

[Kat Wildd]

I love short poems..it takes real skill to say a lot in a few words

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thanx so much! I completely agree I am of the opinion that the shorter a poem the power it can hold if written correctly.

[ROSALIND]

I really like this short and and sweet and it says everything

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

aww thanx so much I'm glad you enjoyed it! :-)

[Rae]

Another short, but sweet poem. I like these a lot more than the longer poems. The longer poems are much harder for me to understand. ^^" These I can actually get a feel of what they could be about. Thank you for writing it. :D

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

no prob at all!!

[Green]

It may have been short but it was very good. You used what you did write to convey a lot of meaning.
Anyways, I've always liked shorter poems better, especially if the author does it right and you did. Good job.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx so much! Iv always been a strong believer that the shorter the poem the more power it can hold

[Mariah Corey]

man for something quite short. It was brilliant, the words are perfect. Man ur writing always shocks me on how well its done. Luv it. :D

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx somuch mariah! but you know me I believe the shorter poems are very much the most powerful

[Mariah Corey]

very true. :D