Aurora Borealis

This is about how the northern lights are eternal and can be controlled by noone because it is everlasting. plz read

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Chrystal beauty in the sky

Such a sight it isn't mine

 

Tis purely divine

 

Not your own

Or his or her's

 

What's the difference?

None of course

 

We see it there and then we die

Now who is there

To see the light

 

Empty graves

And twisted faces

 

On empty heads

On dark dead skulls

 

leaves no traces

 

If noone lives

Was it there?

Or here, somewhere, anywhere?

 

I think its so

For it's the truth

 

I may've not seen

May not've been

 

But I can think

And imagine

Again and again

 

The shine as eternal and everlasting

As Zen

Reviews

[Giorgio Veneto]

A beautiful poem (not for empty heads) with unexpected details. I do not agree with the last two lines. Aurora Borealis does not offer a sign "as Zen". Zen maybe describes a little tiny bit of Aurora Borealis (even though I am reluctant to make such a severe assumption.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

to each their own but i have read accounts of ppl "truly" reaching zen and to them im sure they would say the aurora could not even compare so rly I think it's more a matter of opinion and perspective of which you are entitled to. I do thank you though for the comment and complimet paid.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Just lovely as the northern lights! =D I love it. I wish i could see the beauty in real life myself. It would be stunning just like the pictures. Your poem shows the beauty of it and such peace radiates throughout this piece. I love the rhyme and flow! =)
Keep on writing my fellow writer!
Well done!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx!!! its a personal dream of mine to see it myself so I simply cudnt resist writing a poem about it!

[Sleeping Maiden]

Ahh i see. Well, i hope you get to see it then! Someday! =)
Well done with this poem!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol and thank you so much once again