Strawberry

A haiku about a strawberry

 

 

 

 

 

Red fruit on sweet lips

Symbolizing Summer's Bliss

Sweet berry of mine

 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

This is sweet :) I could feel summer love! Thanks for entering the "Scream" contest.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Lol no problem :-). Glad I cud take u there

[Chloe]

Wow! Cute! I like it! You have a goooooooood chance in the contest! ;) You may even get first.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

ooh yay! I'd really love that, I'll keep my fingers crossed while I wait patiently munching on my strawberries ;-)

[Blue Belle]

Short and sweet. I like it.

[Taylor]

As a fellow contestant of this contest i'd have to say your work was very well thought.

[Holly Mason]

are you trying to torture me...with words like summer...really it is snowing here again!
hahaha this is quite cute and obviously causes emotion!
thank you for sharing your WARM thoughts and strawberries are the best

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol the horrible power of haiku! :-) theyre one of my favorite fruits

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

such a beautiful poem thx so much and colorful.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx :-) just kinda whimsical thing of mine

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

very nice

[Alexa Tasch]

Nice haiku! Really does the strawberry justice :)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Good!! I rly love strawberries

[Alexa Tasch]

Personally I'm not such a huge fan, but they are great to take photos of!!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol

[Sleeping Maiden]

Lovely piece! Strawberries are good. I love them as a shake personally. It tastes heavenly! lol. YUMMY! =D

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

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[Rallaa]

You've actually got six syllables in the first line, not five.
You could drop the word "small" without losing any meaning.
Other than that, I like it.

[rabbit]

yumyumyumyumyummy

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol