Deep inside

A poem about looking to nature for comfort from the hurts that life brings upon you. It's a good poem so give it a read and hopefuly a review.

 

 

 

 

When I seek answers

 

They tease

And trash me

 

 

When I seek love

I don't deserve it

 

When I seek strength

It's so close!

 

But forever out of my reach

As everything always is

 

When I ask why

I am shunned for what they

Could never understand

 

So I close my eyes

My world to everything off

 

I'll stay by nature

For it's always there

As oppose to whats never there

 

Answers are scarce

Thinking is only reached by stars

And trust was lost on the day of clouds

 

Love became a treasure

Never to be found

 

When it blended to the sparkle drops

And the threatening yet comforting cold

That is still here

Even through heart shivering fear

 

These all are hidden in my nothings

And I don't cares

But you'll never know

 

For you're somebody

Where I'm nothing and nobody

That has a hidden something and everything

 

Nestled deep down inside

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Androglossia]

I've said this and will say it again. People tend to ask questions and even take hopeless quests to seek for answers only to find out that there's really nothing at the end of the rainbow. And when hopelessness and despair take over, they coil away from reality and drift away, into their own world. Well I guess it's human nature.

I was scanning your pages and this one caught my attention. Maybe it's the title and the pitch about nature. It's a great piece, the only thing I would want to have corrected if possible is "For your somebody"- I think you meant For you're somebody? I could be wrong. But overall it's a good read.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol thanx I'll go fix that :-)

[Steven Cash]

forgot to rate it, sorry

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

it's alright

[Steven Cash]

Once again, amazing. And the pictures make it that much better. Love how you capture the emotion

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx so much!

[Adam M. Snow]

Truly this deserves a standing O, bravo.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thanx so much! I'm glad you like it :-)

[Adam M. Snow]

You are utmost welcome

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

would you believe me if I told you I was 10 ot twelve when I wrote this??

[Adam M. Snow]

Wow nice

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol thanx :-)

[Adam M. Snow]

Np

[♥ Kinnixk]

Wow. That was my first thought. Just...wow :D

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

aww ur so nice!

[♥ Kinnixk]

^.^ see you tomorrow :D

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

see ya! cnt wait