Celestial

Plz read this! It's a poem about becoming an angel

From the dark

Comes a light

Through the night

 

Floating on a prayer

A cloud, in a meadow

 

Serenity Purified

All wrongs nullified

 

They fade to a hymn

 

Hmmmmm ~

 

On to heaven

Reviews

[Dave "Doc" Rogers]

Nice path from a dark life to redemption, forgiveness, and reward.

Cheers,
Doc.
/CWG Moderator.

[KurKota]

Very nice .....seems brief given the topic, but I like the effort.

[Cameron]

From dark to light...I love the transition. I could say it's heavenly, but that would be pushing the envelope of corny jokes. Well done, Miss, well done :).

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

no prob lol and its alrihgt I like corny its very punny

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Not bad Emily! I'm starting to see your Mother in you! xD

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Now that is always a good thing!!!! :-D

[Jordan's Back]

This is such a beautiful poem, I often picture my sister ascended in the very same manner, a beautiful tearful write of inspiration. Thank you! It actually brought me some comfort.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

im glad it helped you :-) for me thats the very best compliment you can get as a writer

[Jordan's Back]

Allot of your work does.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

:-D ya just know how to make a a girl smile lol

[Jordan's Back]

A way to a poets heart is through her writing :P

[.R.P.]

Enjoyed this. I think you may have meant hymn*

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

got it in 1 :-D