I am M.A.D

just a whimsical poem of mine about being angry that I wrote while I was you guessed it! angry lol give it a read

Everything I saw in the world is not a lie

.... I Hope

It broke my heart

It broke my faith

Do you hear me cry?!

Crumpled on the floor

I wither and I die

And I cry Oh how I cry

Drowning in the nothing

You've burned into my eyes

I was happy with my ignorance

I Don't need this shame

And Im so Bloody tired of this game

Now I'm really sad

All you have to say is,

" Oh babe my bad"

Well I say F**k You  sucker

I .... Am .... Mad

Reviews

[kelvin]

Sometimes anger brings the best and the worst out in us, but many can endure more pain and abuse more then others before finally they had enough. You express a field of different emotion and feeling here. As always keep writing fellow writer

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

always kelvin if nothing else im a writer that can feel and try to make others feel.

[kelvin]

I feel you on that and understand exactly

[Secret Lullaby]

This was really good! i loved it and could REALLY relate to it

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx so much! I was actually really worried about posting it. Its a lot more raw than most of my poems its very blunt and to the point and usually when I write im feeling sad or whimsical not "angry" so its a very rare thing for me. Im very glad you liked it and could relate though! No one was reviewing it so I was thinking it was no good and was considering taking it down.

[Secret Lullaby]

well trust me this was REALLY good

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

like I said thanx :-) I think i'll take a gander at ur work

[Secret Lullaby]

oh ok(: thanks