Tiny heart beater

this is a poem about nature which can also be understood as being a metaphor , whatever you like read if you wna know more! plz + thank u!

Little heart bird

Fly to sky

My little one

Flutter, flutter

make yourself be heard

Sweet heart

Your home is near, dear

Dear beater

don't pray, give

Beat, beat, beater

Take your part 

you will live

Little beater in my hand

Keep on beating

By my command

 

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Not my favourite of yours Emily but an interesting try at something more random and different. It does lack flow and grace and perhaps an edit and some crafting coult raise it up as it does have potential.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

hm thanx I will see about it