Tiny heart beater

this is a poem about nature which can also be understood as being a metaphor , whatever you like read if you wna know more! plz + thank u!

Little heart bird

Fly to sky

My little one

Flutter, flutter

make yourself be heard

Sweet heart

Your home is near, dear

Dear beater

don't pray, give

Beat, beat, beater

Take your part 

you will live

Little beater in my hand

Keep on beating

By my command

 

Reviews

[The Refined Poet]

interesting read... thanks for sharing...

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

no prob I enjoy sharing my work with everyone :-) Im glad you liked it

[kublakhan27]

The last couple of lines remind me of a quote by William Blake that I picked up at school and never forgot: "Where man is not, nature is barren." It's an intriguing look at the relationship between humans and nature...I don't know if you meant for it to be that deep but it is lol :)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Everything I write I aim to be deep. Well mostly.... lol
This is the type that can mean mean many things. Usually as I write I'll have one meaning but as I reread it I will interpret several different meanings that also apply.

[kublakhan27]

That's how things usually unfold with me as well...and people always seem to pick up on every idea but the one that started it all lol :P

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

I have noticed that to!

[Aehr]

cute!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol thanx rhea im glad you liked it :-)

[Pratik]

A sweet write that captures the essence of love in all its beauty...Nice one :)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx so much!!!!

[MusicLover]

Amazing

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx ma-chan

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Beautiful work:)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx so much cord im happy you like it :-)

[Wakeofahero]

This is very good emily, nice job!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

im happy you enjoyed it w.hero

[Steven Cash]

Nice nice

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

glad you liked it

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This is new and different, I love birds so much so that was nice to read teeheehee :D

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx so much J! im glad you enjoyed it