Music

This poem is about how music makes eveything better cuz it sure did for me! Its actually one of my personal favorites you should give it a read!

Melody flies over my skin

It prickles and flows

 

I feel the itch

 

The music is beauty

Pure

But almost never seen

 

Only those truly deserving

Understand what I mean

 

How can it lie

Pretend, seek to mend

All you've thought long broken

After all those fake loves have taken

 

It didn't

It's all you

I hate that, I hate you

 

But still I thank you

For without the sorrow

You brought to my soul

 

I'd never have needed music

To make it whole

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Wasn't sure where you were going with this mid-read, but I SO get it now!

Nicely done.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Music is a important part of life. Funny how songs can bring us to good places and thoughts. I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I sort of liked it but it got sa bit confused as rather than a cellebrastion of the healing of music you dragged it into a lost love.

[Captivating Ink]

Loved it! Especially the beginning part.

[♥ Kinnixk]

:D *standing ovation once again*

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

* takes a bow* "thank you, thank you"

[♥ Kinnixk]

xD lol hello Hannah! :D

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

hello 2 u 2 :-)

[♥ Kinnixk]

^.^ how are you?

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Im a lobster ..... do u realize we are having a convo in the comments

[♥ Kinnixk]

Yup ^.^

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lmfao

[♥ Kinnixk]

mwahaha