Music

This poem is about how music makes eveything better cuz it sure did for me! Its actually one of my personal favorites you should give it a read!

Melody flies over my skin

It prickles and flows

 

I feel the itch

 

The music is beauty

Pure

But almost never seen

 

Only those truly deserving

Understand what I mean

 

How can it lie

Pretend, seek to mend

All you've thought long broken

After all those fake loves have taken

 

It didn't

It's all you

I hate that, I hate you

 

But still I thank you

For without the sorrow

You brought to my soul

 

I'd never have needed music

To make it whole

Reviews

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Yes, music is so beautiful and wonderful, this generation is stressed I think we've become addicts to it :P I know I did ^-^ Great poem! I loved it! :D

[kelvin]

music itself can inspire us change our whole entire mood when listening only from the tunes and if you get what the artist is saying you're in tune with the lyrics as well. As one may like this type of music but can't stand to hear the other but its your music that you like which makes you happy or puts you in tune with your mind set at that times. Music is internationally know in all cultures. as always keep writing fellow writer

[Blue Ivory]

I really love the last two stanzas! great work!

[R.M. Duchene]

This is one that is a bit confusing to me. Are you talking about being jilted by someone and music making it better, or that music can make you feel both better or worse?

[Orlando Junior]

Aamazing poem, and it's true what you wrote. Music makes everything better, and when I'm feeling down or when I'm stressed, I only listen to music and it makes me feel so much better. And I listen to my favorite band (Tne Birthday Massacre) their melodies make me feel calm, make me travel to another world and I can see an amazing atmosphere of fantasy and joy XD I LOVE MUSIC!

GREAT POEM, CONGRATULATIONS

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

THANK YOU!! for some reason some ppl arent getting the message of the poem. :-( I thought it was pretty sraight forward...

[Orlando Junior]

It was, but I did get the message xD Don't worry about that ^^

[Shaylynn H.]

I agree with the guy down below who said it's a confusing message - it's well written though.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx hahaha :-) well it does say what its about in the descroption. poetry isnt always staightforward especially mine. personally, I didnt think this one was very confusing most ppl seem to understand it , anyway. *shrugs shoulders* to each their own and all that jazz

[Rob Santana]

Music does make everything better. I love music!!!! MUSIC=LIFE..Good write Emily Dickinson Jr.

[Tex]

oh that is lovely... a very nice write... my wife and i use music to alter and improve our moods. you did a nice job of capturing that. very good write.

[Dani]

Very nice. Love it.

[de_maruf]

good job