Music

This poem is about how music makes eveything better cuz it sure did for me! Its actually one of my personal favorites you should give it a read!

Melody flies over my skin

It prickles and flows

 

I feel the itch

 

The music is beauty

Pure

But almost never seen

 

Only those truly deserving

Understand what I mean

 

How can it lie

Pretend, seek to mend

All you've thought long broken

After all those fake loves have taken

 

It didn't

It's all you

I hate that, I hate you

 

But still I thank you

For without the sorrow

You brought to my soul

 

I'd never have needed music

To make it whole

Reviews

[S]

I just love the modern style of your pieces...its very fresh and new,
the music has its own secret ways of rejuvenating us in all times..
but we only feel it when we are down,
Its a great poem in all...

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

I'm really glad you like my style :-). Iv never really thought about what type it is for me poetry is something you need to feel and sometimes it hits the mark and sometimes it doesn't but it's always something precious, a special piece of your soul :-). Music for me has always been there when ppl dnt understand music can.

[S]

:)
please take some time to review my works as well..i'd be grateful... :)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol sure if you have anything particular you want me to look at just message me. as it is iv deisabled the rr's becuase I have over 1,00 built up.

[Otaku-chan99]

Music is life.. It can help even the saddest and hateful people through anything, and that's one of the main reasons it's so important to me. This poem is also really great. I love music and i'm sure ALOT of people can agree with me. Music is my life and my only escape from the hard reality that is life, so again great poem it's awesome

[Spookers]

Music is a universal language and can unite even the most unlikely people. No matter what mood you are in, there is a song that can relate, and then there is always a song that can make you feel better.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

exactly! :-)

[Emberlorna]

Beautiful, I love this and feel I can relate so well, very well written and a delightful read :)

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

ouff! this is good! These short lines slice awfully well Em!

Music skin whole! the links were really strong and the 5th stanza has verve!

[Tomi]

Excellent work..Love it!

[Joey Johnson]

Nice. Music is pure and touches me in much the same way. This is a great poem and you did well an amazing job.

[Alexa Tasch]

This is really well written! Music is such a beautiful subject and this is a beautiful poem. Music is very inspirational. Great write!

[Japanese Cherry]

Love the flow. Wonderfully written, good job and keep writing more good pieces for me to enjoy!