Wind kisses

about innocent girl wanting 2 feel wind against her she coudn't resist, it her father warned her it was dangerous, she finds out why

Rushing wind in my face

Steals the feeling leaves no trace

 

Can you see?

I'll never know

Why my papi tells me no

 

It feels so good

I lean out

 

I catch the wind!

Im real proud

 

My eyes do twinkle

Im in pure bliss

 

I feel a shock

I am kissed

 

I look into the eyes

And what do I see?

 

But sneering, snarling

Death's skull head

Looking eyeless

Lipless, skinless

Back at me

 

And he simply says

"Okaeri"

 

© 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr.  All rights reserved

 

 

 

Author's Note

okaeri means welcome home

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

races along to a sticky end..very good....Dad's are usually right...do not tell my daughter I said that

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

dont worry lol it can be our little secret

[Dr. Wood ?]

yeah..nobody else will read this....

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

yes ur probally right lol

[Dr. Wood ?]

well it is beddy byes for me..it is now 20 past midnight here...Goodnight..and thanks for the chat

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

no prob bye

[Sirius King]

innocent fun turns into the kiss of death...great poem!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol thanx so much im glad you liked it!!!!

[Sirius King]

lol :-)

[Forest Green]

Completely original twist in the end...I like the theme, and the poetic march is very well done...

Nice work...!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thanx so much!! once in a while I like to mix the languages I know together :-D

[Yoav Ilan]

Great rhythm that works really well with the present tense to paint sharp visuals. Well done!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Im glad you like it!! I always do my best to paint a vivid picture

[JuniperPearl]

Nice job! This has a great rhythm to it as well as great visuals as others have noted. It is ambiguous enough to be very interesting, but not to abstract as to not be understood. Really an interesting and thought stimulating read.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thanx a bunch Juniper Im glad you liked it so much!!

[JuniperPearl]

You're welcome!

[Olyvia Synn]

This was a beautiful little piece of poetry I love the visuals

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thanx I'm so glad you like it Olyvia!!! I try to make others see what I do

[SmileBig :)]

I really like this. Nice to read, good job :)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Im glad you liked it TLN ! :-D thanx so much

[Shane Blackheart]

Really interesting. It was fun to read, I am into the horror genre myself and the ending was definitely spooky.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol thanx!!! I love horror hahaha

[Corset]

This was pretty spooky actually, I suppose innocent trusting giggling girls should listen to their daddies.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol yes, yes they should! im a bit into the horror genre so a few of my works are on the darker side