Crimson Truths

Crimson Truths

A Poem by Emily Dickinson Jr.
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I based this poem off the anime inuyasha. It's about a cold, cruel man finding out he loves a woman but not untill it is far to late

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Rose, rose, rose

Crimson drops they fall

 

You see perfection

 

It hates and kills me

But I'll stay standing

 

I'll scream at it

No fear with a knife

And a claw at my throat

 

You'll look in my eye

You'll never admit it

But you're in love

 

You want to taint snow

With a lowly creature

 

So you sneer

You lash at me

Your image disapears

 

You are a lord

You're not modest at least

 

But when you see me sob

 

For the first time

Privy to my broken heart

You can't help but want a piece

 

As I lay broken

In puddles of blood

You see my porcelein face

And your permanent sneer

Is erased

 

Somehow I've changed

Yet I've stayed the same

Fair skin, rainbow eyes

Ruby lips

 

You've never known before

 

Big suprise

As I lay quite

I take my dying breath

 

You ogle

What your foolish

Mind, could never see

That your insightful heart

Could mournfully

Always see

 

As I whisper

" My prince, this is me."

 

So as you cry

for the very first time

Your frozen heart dies

 

And you see the monster you are

As you cry under those cruel unfeeling

Stars

 

When you look into

Your own

Amber eyes, only

Truly saw

Reflected in my

Crimson pond

 

© 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr.  All rights reserved

© 2013 Emily Dickinson Jr.


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another great write...(you need to put a letter 'R' in porcelain and dying is not dieing...I do it all the time....Really good though..I LOVED the whisper

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dr. Wood ?

12 Years Ago

yes i read Isaac Newton and reviewed it.....So many on this site it is easy to lose track
Emily Dickinson Jr.

12 Years Ago

my first poem was about 10ish well my first decent one. it was... wonderful .... but my mother lost.. read more
Dr. Wood ?

12 Years Ago

sore news....Golden rule then applied..write it down and KEEP it...of course now with hard drives it.. read more
As I lay broken
in puddles of blood...
Well penned.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

12 Years Ago

Thanx Sami!!!
Sami Khalil

12 Years Ago

You are welcome...
Really really think this is wonderful :) fantastic job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

12 Years Ago

Glad you like it!! thanx so much :-)
SmileBig :)

12 Years Ago

No problem :)
How many ways can I say amazing?

100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

12 Years Ago

its always great to hear from you steve
im rly glad you enjoyed it so much!
Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

it's no problem

and it was really good
Emily Dickinson Jr.

12 Years Ago

lol im rl happy you like it!! :-) you guys rly make my day or night as is the case now
Writer! You are awesome. I enjoyed this much. I don't "get" poetry sometimes... This one just speaks o me. I will work toward reading your stories. I can be of more help there. Welcome.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

12 Years Ago

I'm really glad you enjoyed it lol :-D I always look forward to reviews thanx
Oh, loved this!
Snow White and Beauty and the Beast¨and every other fairy tale all rolled into one - or that's how I saw it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

12 Years Ago

I actually based it off a feudal fairy tale from japan so thats probally why you got that vibe. I'm.. read more
Yheela

12 Years Ago

Not too far off then! ^_^
Haha I don't watch it much, mainly cuz he irritates me :P This is really sweet though...I can picture this coming from Kagome (can't remember how it's spelled) for sure...nice job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Yeah it makes sense really...since most of the shows are Japanese they're meant to be watched in tha.. read more
Emily Dickinson Jr.

12 Years Ago

of course!! I know loads
kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

:)
WOW THIS IS AWESOME!!! I LOVE IT!!! IT'S SO EMOTIONAL AND BEAUTIFUL IT FEELS INAPPROPRIATE TO PUT THE REVIEW IN ALL CAPS BUT I'M DOING IT ANYWAY!!! WOW THE IMAGERY IS AMAZING AND THE STORY IT TELLS AND THE STORY BEHIND IT... GENIUS!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

12 Years Ago

Lol I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! I dnt mind the caps they just show how much you liked it and that ju.. read more
Admiral Kirk

12 Years Ago

NO PROBLEM! THAT'S GREAT I LIKE CAPS TOO!!! :D

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Added on July 29, 2012
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Tags: crimson, death, blood, perfection, noble, lord, inuyahsa, kagome, love, pure, demon, claws

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Im just a highschool girl. Writing is my hobby and I think Im fairly good at it but I leave you to be the judge of that. :-) my best short stories are: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/poisinros.. more..

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