I knew you were good enough! Congratulations!!! I tweeted, FB, and shared it on my Google. I am so proud of you!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Lop thanks so much!! I'm so happy this poems getting around since it is a personal favorite of mine.. read moreLop thanks so much!! I'm so happy this poems getting around since it is a personal favorite of mine even though it is fairly old.
Again, nice work, lovely written indeed. Liked it again, this time i won't say that i loved this line or that stanza, because, this time i like your whole poem.
Almost saying "I told you so," in a beatifully poetic way. This was a journey through swaying branches and opaque glass only revealing itself to those who truly believe and understand. Very nicely done.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
thats exaclty the idea! lol
Im glad you could appreciate how I expressed the sentiment
It's like Beauty and the Beast personified and turned inside out. I like the places you took me with your vivid descriptions, love this part the absolute best....
'want to taint snow
With a lowly creature'
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I like that part a lot 2! when I read it aloud I put a lot of sas and irony into that part lol
Indeed. I believe you have nailed it on this one. While it may be geared towards love, it is anything but cliché. I was draw into this poem through your use of imagery. You showed the reader the emotions, instead of telling them...which is what every poet should do. Well done.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
thanx T.R :-) lol I told you not to let those first two poems fool you :-P I'm really happy you co.. read morethanx T.R :-) lol I told you not to let those first two poems fool you :-P I'm really happy you could appreciate it
Congratulations this poem has been "approved" for publication in...
THE MAGICAL MYTHICAL MYSTERY COMPENDIUM.
-Fantasy and Factual Poems of the Arcane.
By John Phoenix Hutchinson and Others. (c) 2012
Please feel free to submit other poems as you are not limited to one entry. Also please write a short "bio" about yourself and send to me via private message. This will be published along with your poem. Thanks J.P.H.
Anyone wanting to make Submissions to this Writers Cafe "e" book Project can do so on my group page, the deadline is 1st of November 2012.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
The fairytale vibe made this a much easier choice than your blood violet poem. Great poem well done.
Thanx so much John! I'll send that as soon as I am able. by blood violet are you refering to blood.. read moreThanx so much John! I'll send that as soon as I am able. by blood violet are you refering to blood lily?
12 Years Ago
Yes sorry. You would not believe how many poems I have read the last two days with more to come hope.. read moreYes sorry. You would not believe how many poems I have read the last two days with more to come hopefully :)
This read to me like a fairytale but a lamentable one at that. Although in a way a truth shone through it in the form of an enlightenment. Ah the myth of love.......
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
It really makes sense that it came across as a fairytale! This is because it was based off a japane.. read moreIt really makes sense that it came across as a fairytale! This is because it was based off a japanese animation called animation which is based off a fuedal fairytale. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I aim in all my poems to teach in one way or another and I always like it best when someone is able to walk away with a realisation! :-)
Im just a highschool girl. Writing is my hobby and I think Im fairly good at it but I leave you to be the judge of that. :-)
my best short stories are: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/poisinros.. more..