Lost in questions

This is about a girl whos treated horribly and how she sees the world read plz!

 

 

 

When I seek answers

They tease and trash me

 

When I seek love

I don't deserve it

 

When I seek strength

It's so close, but forever

Out of my reach

As everything always is

 

When I ask why, I

Am shunned for what, they

Could never understand

 

So I close my eyes

My world to everything off

 

I'll stay by nature

For it's always there

As opposed to what's never there

 

Answers are scarce

Thinking is only reached by stars

And trust was lost

on the day of clouds

 

Love became a treasure

never to be found

When it blended to

The sparkle drops

 

And the threatening yet

Comforting cold

That is still here

through heart stilling

Shivering fear

 

These are hidden

In my nothings

And I don't cares

 

But you'll never know

For your somebody

Where Im nothing and nobody

 

That has a hidden something

and everything

hidden deep inside

Reviews

[Victoria Elizabeth]

This is a very good write, I love it!!!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

aww thanx so much victoria im glad you like it!

[Victoria Elizabeth]

your welcome

[marie]

wow.... can't believe how true that rings to me, you don't happen to be a mind reader do you lol ? :)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Noooo but i wish i was lol :-P

[marie]

Don't we all? Life would be so much simpler but then what if we heard something we really didn't want to?

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

i think its better to know horrible things from the start then to get a very unpleasant suprise later on

[marie]

than again comes the saying ignorance is bliss, there are somethings that you wish you had never known, and once you do, your life is changed forever

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

eh personaly id rather know now then b betrayed later on

[marie]

but if you know now you may never know if the person was going to tell you, never know if the relationship could be salvaged

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

eh id rather only make friends to the true types. its better to have a few rly good ones then have a few iffy ones whom u probaly wont completely trust

[marie]

i'm not saying they are iffy, haven't you ever done something you deeply regret thye have to, and because of that we need to give the person themselves a moment to tell us what they have done. one mistake or two shouldn't ruing a relationship, and it most definitely will if you find out through means that are not their own mouth

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

if i cud read their minds then id know that though! :-P and if they did willfuly hurt u then they shudnt have been ur friend to begin with and that wud prevent the whole process

[marie]

maybe they thought it would help you and they didn't know it hurt you!! you can't read from their minds what they don't know, and if you found out from reading their mind you couldn't tell them because they'd ship you off to loony bin, so you would be stuck hating your friend and they would have no clue why!! a relationship ruined from nothing but a silly ability

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

but if they thought it you would know. and they cnt not know if theyre already thinking it. you wouldnt have to tell them either. a relationship that shouldn't have been if they thing horrible things of you. the truth will set you free.

[marie]

You are clearly close minded and set in your ways I refuse to argue with you anymore

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

stole the thoughts right out of my head about your personality

[marie]

Heh takes one to know one:)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

same

[LadyBug]

Nice. That's all I can say.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx?

[Captivating Ink]

Excellent poem. Signifes to me how we must find out most things by ourselves because not many people will tell us the real truth.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem for thought.
"But you'll never know
For your somebody
Where Im nothing and nobody"
When we treat another as a ghost. They can fade away from us and we will never know why? I like the desire and the purpose for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Alexa Tasch]

This is sad. I can feel your pain in this piece. It flows so well and is beautifully written too! The raw emotion comes through sharp like a knife and cuts the readers heart. I love it

[Emberlorna]

So sad it touches the heart. I have felt this way many times.. Thank you for sharing such a moving piece. I really enjoyed :}

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

it was my pleasure Emberlorna and I thank you for your review :-D

[Cwortknee]

I can definitely relate to this piece and I'm sure others can as well. I think we all feel this way some time or another. This poem is thought provoking, well written, and an enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing!