On Love, Forever, and the Like

On Love, Forever, and the Like

A Story by Clarisse Nanoit
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Just thinking out loud. It's not too hard to see to the bottom of the muddy water, but maybe I'll never touch it. There's just no way of knowing. I think it's up to me to at least try, though.

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Love is not a ticket to Forever; it is merely a driving force to get one there. For Forever is not a period of time, it is a destination, a journey. I never claimed to be an expert on love, or a qualified judge of its authenticity, but doesn't it seem that if one has it, they'd been willing to do just about anything to make it to Forever? Where does going the distance for what you want cross into being irresponsible, into making foolish decisions?

I have often heard that love is blind, that only fools and believers fall in love, that love makes you do things you'd never consider doing otherwise. So where are the limits? Are there limits? Why do some people who claim to have real love move countries away, leaving all they've known behind to be with their Forever Loves and others say, "Well, it was fun while it lasted. I'll miss you. If things were only different, perhaps we could have worked out."

I conclude, my friend, that love is relative, just like color, just like time. The only question is, do you concur?

© 2010 Clarisse Nanoit


Author's Note

Clarisse Nanoit
The cover art is my own. Hope you enjoy. Let me know your thoughts on the subject. I already know the writing is solid. Make the reviews mainly about how you feel about Love and Forever.

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Did I ever give you another response to this?

Anyway. Now you are going to get my new thoughts. I don't know what the difference will be since I have nothing to compare it to. But I'm giving it. Unless this is the one I responded to in some writing on here. Okay. Done rambling.

my thought. i wish this was longer. then id be able to figure out what to say....
because i agree.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Did I ever give you another response to this?

Anyway. Now you are going to get my new thoughts. I don't know what the difference will be since I have nothing to compare it to. But I'm giving it. Unless this is the one I responded to in some writing on here. Okay. Done rambling.

my thought. i wish this was longer. then id be able to figure out what to say....
because i agree.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a thought provoking piece to me but very well done ... love is a journey in the end i think it is one that everyone hopes to conquer!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

loved it.,..

you distracted me, therefore you get a review on how i feel later.=]

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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