White Night

Not a great piece. I know it builds up too much for the abrupt ending it has. Anti-climatic... sry. This is the first piece I've ever written that was remotely this racey. lol. Forgive my youth and ignorance.

You think I'm naive, prudish,

uninterested in things physical,

hot to the touch.

If I could show you,

I definitely would.

 

I definitely would start with

a long, sweet kiss.

Wandering lips would find your neck,

your face,

your lips once more.

 

Your lips once more would scower

my eagerly awaiting

anything and everything

until I stopped you short, removing

your shirt and hugging you to me,

whispering something sexy.

 

Whispering something sexy back,

you'd probably tell me you were surprised.

Betraying my nerves,

I'd blush and kiss your ear.

For "old time's sake".

 

For old time's sake, you'd peck

my nose, but I'd take control back.

I'd press you down against the couch,

feeling your chest muscles beneath my palms and do

things you'd never expect

 

Things you'd never expect of me,

like removal of your belt with one hand

and torso coverage with my lips,

shocking you.

"Oh, Kristen," you'd say in disbelief.

How I love to hear that!

 

How I love to hear that I'm clever

and exciting, if suprising,

if a tease.

Because I want to prove my love (want you to know),

but I'm just not ready yet.

Reviews

[Kristin Brecoe]

aww. the ending i think is fine. because its what its saying. [if that made sense...]
you are going through these crazy thoughts inside ones self, but to really be out there and to pull through with it, its a sudden, abrupt stop youd come to when your mind catches up to your bodys movement... [maybe that made more sense.]

do i get to hear what is behind this?

-kristin.

[Ivory]

i really liked this piece. I think everyone has had a similiar moment like this.
Good write and thanks for submitting it into the contest.. ; )