NP, Homie G.

NP, Homie G.

A Poem by Clarisse Nanoit

 

 No promises

Even with that thought running through my head,

none of this is really any easier.

 

 No promises

A phrase from so far (not so far?) back

that I’m attempting to convince myself was real,

tangible.

 

 No promises

With that in mind, I hand you over to her…

the one we once mocked as a simpleton.

If she makes you happy, I promise to let it be,

even if it rips my own heart into a thousand tiny pieces.

 

 No promises

I fully intend to stay your friend and never expect more.

 

 

 

No promises

 

No promises

 

No promises

 

No promises

 

No promises

© 2008 Clarisse Nanoit


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i really do like this one and it fits so well with so many...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aw. i dont know what to say.
but kristen, you are strong! i know it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this hit right home...the usage of repetition was perfect and then some! of course the last two lines really delivered the final unexpected blow...great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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