In The Moment

short verse with feeling

There are words that go unspoken,

And some that we shouldn't voice.

There are promices that remain unbroken,
And uncertainty over each choice.

Lines from songs
that linger long
after the music has ended.

There are shouts that go unheard,
And quiet voices we hear if we listen.

There are smiles that light like a hummingbird,
And tears unstopped to make shinning eyes glisten.

There are boxes of time we rarely open,
And memories that tie the knot,
but no matter the pain or your way of coping,
One kind word can mean alot.

Reviews

[Cherrie]

actually the word flow worked for me it was a simple message that needed simple and true images to line our way, a journey of the heart, good work, great flow and a smooth pace

[RareRed]

Nice...I've been away from the site awhile. Nice to read your work again.

[Kaitlin W. Blaylock]

Nice. Good flow. But maybe use a spell-checker before publishing?

[Deanarrlack]

Asides from a few spelling errors, this isnt bad. Maybe try pumping up your word usage a little i.e. less literal more lyrical. Good Luck,