SNAFU

Funny but Not...

 

SNAFU

 

People at the gas tank

Feeling robbed

People willing to work

Can’t get no job

Where do you go

When it all falls down

Try and go forward

You get turned around

 

Like trying to drink

From an empty cup

Situation Normal

All Fucked Up!

 

People trying to find

Something to eat

Go to the grocer

Can’t trust the meat

Where do you go

When it all falls down

Try and go forward

You get turned around

 

Like trying to drink

From an empty cup

Situation Normal

All Fucked Up!

 

Nobody understands

What’s going on

Try to hold it together

Just comes undone

Where do you go

When it all falls down

Try and go forward

You get turned around

 

Like trying to drink

From an empty cup

Situation Normal

All Fucked Up!

 

Reviews

[imawriter]

I agree, sounds like a song to me--and a good one at that.

[Rain]

Definately written as a song, and a good one. Repetition can destroy, or enhance a poem/song. It takes skill to make it fit. You have done it with this piece. You need to find a good musician. Rain..