Lay It On Me

Cry me a river

Never get better

Ruin your life

While I take mine higher

Take in the day

Of what is to come

Forget yesterday

Of what is now done

Count all your blessings

Of the things you have

Really, you're testing

The roadways and paths

Stop ruining your life

It's not getting you anywhere

Stay away from the knife

I'm somebody who cares

Reviews

[Aekmy]

I love this! It is so hopeful aside from your other poems. ^_^

One error: Stop ruining you life

[man Atek]

nice poem
remember to testing
on stepping live