First Step To Freedom

It's basically a comparison of moving out of a house and moving on in life, away from the pain.

Empty boxes soon to be filled

A full house soon to be emptied

The car seats folded down to make space

The tears down my cheeks as i look at the house one more time

My arms full of my possesions to take with me

The boxes fill

The house empties

The family is packed into the car

As we pull out of the drive-way

For the last time

I'm moving on

Now, it's your turn

 

 

It's like my heart is emptied

From all the memories

And the pain

And my heart is filled

With the experiences

And the joy

I take one last look through the past

And I pack them up

Never to be re-opened

I take my family with me

So that they won't suffer too

But I'll miss this house

And I'll miss those memories

But I don't want to feel afraid

And I don't want to be in pain

So I'm moving on

Now it's your turn

 

Reviews

[We are young.]

This is wonderful, moving out and away from the pain is a good thing to write about it is truly a step to freedom.