Can perfection not be perfect?

Can nothing be good enough,

To meet your standards?

Can nothing be safe enough,

To prevent your hazards?

 

Can nothing be right,

In your eyes?

Can I do nothing to please you,

So you continue to despise?

 

Love does hurt I know,

But can you not be good to me?

Love hurts like hell I know,

But can it not be the right degree?

 

Can't you see,

That I'm hurting too?

Can't you see,

That I really miss you?

 

You need to redeem yourself

And retract those claws

And you need to realize

That even perfection has it's flaws

 

Such as a rose and it's thorns

A bull and it's horns.

So beautiful yet so very dangerous.

This cannot be perfection?

News Flash dear one, someone needs to tell you...

That even Perfection has it's flaws too...

Reviews

[We are young.]

This was magnificent!
"A rose has its thorns."
"a bull its horns"
I loved those lines they were amazing

[Aekmy]

Only one comment? Well this is beautiful love. Simply wondrous. :]

[Wildecat]

This is a superb piece of writing, and very true. Thanks for sharing.