Let's all make a stand to understand what could happen if we all let go...

Let's all make a stand to understand what could happen if we all let go...

A Poem by mae-mae<3
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TA DA!!!!

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I look through these poems

And I see hurt, pain

I wonder to myself

Why? Why can't we all be happy

I can't say i'm not one of them

I'm no hypocrite

So I'm making a stand to say

Why don't we all 'Let go'.....?

© 2009 mae-mae<3


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Why don't we all let go? if only it was this simple, short but powerful.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like your observation that a lot of the poems that you read all have a strong sense of hurt and/or pain. It's something everyone can relate to, but I find that themes of sorrow, anguish, hurt, or pain are like salt. If used in proper amounts, it's the perfect seasoning. If overdone, it ruins everything. I digress.

Your resolve is very clear, that we should all let go, and I definitely appreciate that. Have a good one, and keep up the good work!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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