Thoughts

This was also written on 11/7/12. It's an apology to those who have read my poetry

My thoughts betray me,
With every tale
By now my thoughts
have surely gone stale?

There is nothing new,
with each write
Sure you're sick
of such such a sight!

I only complain,
cry, scream, or squeal
Turning the smallest,
Into such a deal

I suppose I am bored,
You must be too
Why else would we have,
seen me so through?

I entertain,
I try to delight
So I may
close my eyes for sleep at night

Author's Note

ignore grammar

Reviews

[}Echo{]

Nicely written. I like this. :)

[rnuff]

Wow so nicely written and wonderful flow.
I like this it's deep and powerful

[Fuego31]

Well then I'm happy to say this is some of my more shallow work, so I hope you enjoy the others :)

[Eric Jameson]

I really don't mind the grammar perfection...well, I mean I do, but as long as I see a good poem. That is what I'm looking for! You have something, like I said, that is very likely to shine, when fully perfected. However, it's not quite there yet. Keep going, don't stop! You're very good, but a little too plain and alot of pounding rhymes.

[Fuego31]

Well, if you would like lighter rhymes (or none at all), some of my earlier work offers that.

[C.C. Marx]

don't apologize, I repeat DON'T APOLOGIZE.....you posting a poem every five seconds gives me something to do :)

[Fuego31]

lol you're about to be out of luck then, because I've only got one more to put on here and then my page will be stagnant for a bit...

[C.C. Marx]

damn it! I like reviewing and plus i rack up the points while I'm reading great poetry...win win

[Fuego31]

Well, I've got nearly 80 on here. That should keep you for a bit haha

[C.C. Marx]

But I like to see things posted them I'm like hmm I will go read that....speaking of which don't you have a poem to read though you probably shouldn't (its not very good)