Why Would They

Why Would They

A Poem by Fuego31
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Perfect example of feeling very insecure with oneself

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No one wants me,
No one wants this for a boyfriend
why would they?

No one wants to hold me close,
to have me in their arms
why would they?

No one wants to kiss me,
Too see if that special spark
jolts us with electricity
I'm lonely
All I can hope for is that
Somebody will,
                   Someday

But why would they?

© 2013 Fuego31


Author's Note

Fuego31
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Wow, I love love love this!
But what I love most is the rhythm of this. It's got a little swing to it. Good job! xD

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fuego31

12 Years Ago

Awww thank you :)
You are very brave to post such a personal piece! I applaud you :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

12 Years Ago

That's awesome! A lot of people write beautiful poems but never have the courage to post them
Fuego31

12 Years Ago

A friend of mine convinced me to have such bravery. And there isn't a picture of me, nor my name. So.. read more
C.C. Marx

12 Years Ago

Well courage is courage and as you see, I have not posted my full name and only a pic of my feet so .. read more

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Added on November 6, 2012
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Fuego31
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Sometimes I just write on random imagination and thoughts, but I mostly write what's inspired by my strongest emotion at that given moment. I've been been writing since I was 13 and I'm currently 24. .. more..

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