Night Sky

Another random thought

Standing beneath a starlit sky,
I stare at my feet and sigh
I'm wondering why,
The sky is so high
The stars are so far away,
Just enough to keep me at bay
Moon is so bright,
providing much light
I see a comet in the distance,
I can just feel its resistance
I no longer feel alone,
Under a sky that looks like a dome

Author's Note

Ignore grammar issues please

Reviews

[Eric Jameson]

very interesting...you know, I never would find alot of poets who express their deepest and strongest emotions. I think you have something here. Something that, if grown to mature perfection, will outshine brighter than the sun. Let it grow, I'll look forward to reading more.