...do not..

...do not..

A Poem by youngteen
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its about being gay and what peopels perception of being gay

"

do not lay your comments

down on me

for i am free

do not throw your stones and daggers

at my soul

for i am whole

do not convince me of a lie

for i would rather die

do not scream or raise your voice

for it is not a choice

do not try and break me down

for my value is more than that of a golden crown

do not frown upon me

for i am made of more than what you see

for if you do these things

it is not I that will perish in the pit of fire

but you

for placeing judgment that was never yours to place

for making comments that was never yours to make

for breaking hearts that was never yours to break

for taking souls that was never yours to take.

© 2010 youngteen


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youngteen
plz comment an review an rate thanx!

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I loved the opening lines of this.This is expressed well. It doesn't matter
who you are or what you are you still have feelings and a heart.
I think this is a wonderful write.


Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on May 10, 2010
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youngteen
youngteen

cape town, good wood, South Africa



About
im a gay teenager that recently came out to my parents im 15 years an i write im entering this site just to see if my writeing is any good an to see if i can mayb one day go for it as a career choice more..

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A Poem by youngteen