...emptyness...

...emptyness...

A Poem by youngteen
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its very said an about break up

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I feel lost you not their anymore you not with me i always felt you I always heard your voice your heart that use to cry out to me now mine is gone with you an I miss you please! come back I miss your touch… your love now I feel lost and empty I feel incomplete I feel alone no one understands no one ever did you’ve taken a big part of me away a part that I can never get back without you…I laugh I smile it feels numb life feels unreal the seasons past but I never change time only makes the pain greater you on my mind every day I thought if I don’t talk about you if I never mention your name that it would make the reality of the fact that your gone a lie because then I don’t have to face the fact that you not there anymore my heart is gone every part of me is dead I’m breathing but this action feels wrong it feels off like I’m missing something my eyes are dead I want to cry but don’t know why its as if…as if..I’m dead the pain grows every day it hurts more and more its difficult to pretend now because I feel the mask breaking my smile gets worst my laugh is broken I knew I wasn’t in love with you I still believe I’m not yet now that you gone I feel like stone like I’m a person with no purpose lost in the most empty place iv ever been in

© 2010 youngteen


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i think its nic but i hope u like it 2

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youngteen

cape town, good wood, South Africa



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im a gay teenager that recently came out to my parents im 15 years an i write im entering this site just to see if my writeing is any good an to see if i can mayb one day go for it as a career choice more..

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A Poem by youngteen