love, lies, and heartbreak

we fell in love. well at least i did.

you acted like you were going to be with me forever,

you acted like you loved me, you acted like you cared

but it was all a lie.

what were you thinking when you were kissing her.

did you even think about my feelings.

NO you were stuck on the taste of her lips.

now we have this dilemma, a love triangle i like to call it.

I'm trying to get out of it, but that task can't seem to be accomplished.

you have me stuck under your spell.

I'm trying to turn away but your beauty is an image i want to keep.

It erases the pain and the tears that i weep.

But as i come to realize, these tears are from you.

for you don't hold my heart, this love is untrue.

i need to break away i need to be free,

before everything i know of me turns into dust.

getting out of this is a must.

Reviews

[Jean]

This was good. :)
One thing you can do to improve it is with these lines

"you acted like you were going to be with me forever,
you acted like you loved me, you acted like you cared "

You want to show rather than tell. That's one of the key points of writing, I've learned. Show how they acted that way rather say they did. In other words, say what they did, and how they acted like that. It will make the poem much more unique and it will show you put a lot more thought into it.

Hope this helps. :)