Going

If only we could truly freeze time

He cups her face in 
his hands 
but silently she melts 
away 
oozing through absence 
in puddles at 
his feet 

A knowing glance 
Down 
A blank stare 
Ahead 

Storing your clocks in the freezer can only do so much 

Time 
Melted away just as she

Reviews

[ksscampos]

i am sad for the character in the poem. great emotions portrayed in this poem. thank you for sharing

[ThackeryBinx]

Wow that was a great but sad visual. It reminds me of the way Dali liked to paint all those melting clocks while he was on drugs. I was wondering if "storing your clocks in the freezer" is actually something people do, or is that a metaphor your using? Either way that's a real clever use of words.

[Jamie]

Such a powerful piece of poetry! Really good read :)