Somber Excuses

Somber Excuses

A Poem by Taylor<3

Tell me why,

Explain the reason,

to be

so

morose,

somber,

melancholy,

sad.

 

Awful

attachment

to

indifferent

feelings.

 

Dragging

down

what

sanity

you

had.

 

Change

your

vision

releash

those

thoughts,

 

and

in

the

end

you'll

see....

 

Sadness

isn't

comforting;

better

to

be

happy.

© 2008 Taylor<3


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I liked your sentiments, but I'm a little confused as to why you chose to space it out the way you did. Personally I found it a little distracting.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Taylor&lt;3
Taylor<3

Valdosta, GA



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My name is Taylor i'm 14 years old. I'm a Leo. My fave color is Velvet Blue the color of my room. I've been writing poetry for 2yrs. as a hobby mostly. I mostly listed to music (rock/alternative) and.. more..

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