Tattoo

On a little note held his last goodbyes.

Repenting for all the whispered lies,

he left in sorrow and in shame.

He couldn't stand to see her face anymore, that look of gentle tragedy.

 

He was the tattoo hidden on her heart, the poison in her veins.

He was just one more mistake, one more awful pain.

All those sleepless nights and hazy days, him falling on the floor.

And she never even questioned him, never even asked him to say those two little words,

 

The ones he said every tiem hie stumbled in the door, every ER visit, every night she held his head up.

 

The ones he couldn't bring himself to say anymore.

 

I'm Sorry.

Reviews

[Leo Gems]

There is such grief in this piece that comes across throughly for the reader. There is a story behind this piece that is revealing but not completely... It leaves the reader to wonder... what actually happened to leave both parties so broken.

A very good piece and ink.. there is a couple of typos on the line of "every time he.." but an emotionally charged piece all the same!

[Last Lying Look]

This was such a sad piece yet very beautiful.
Amazing write.
My favorite part was:
"On a little note held his last goodbyes.
Repenting for all the whispered lies,
he left in sorrow and in shame.
He couldn't stand to see her face anymore, that look of gentle tragedy."

Beautiful piece. It was so sad but in an almost calming way.

-Elissa :)

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I CAN FEEL THE EMOTION AND HURT IN THIS WRITE, VERY WELL WRITTEN....AMANDA