Secret Sorrows

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Secret Sorrows.

 

Her eyes grey/blue and like the sea.

Their colours changing constantly.

They sparkle when she’s having fun

Like water droplets in the sun.

At other times they darken to grey

Because her mind is far away.

Completely lost in reverie

Reliving some sad memory.

Secret sorrows she won’t share

Perhaps because she does not dare.

I think in time she will decide.

She no longer needs to hide.

What happened to her long ago.

The time has come to let it go.

 

Saturday, 04 August 2012

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

I'm not sure what to say of this poem, it is okay I suppose. Concept seems to fluctuate from describing the girl, then her memories good and bad, then release. I would suggest working on that.