Not Always True!

senryu string

Not always true.

 

Loud cries of protest.

New baby greets the real world.

Most reluctantly.

 

Though very welcome.

He would much rather be back.

Where he used to be.

 

Safe and warm inside

His own private paradise.

That’s why he complains.

 

He soon gains control

Master of his universe

Beloved tyrant.

 

He will have to learn.

That his will is not the law.

As we all had to.

 

Only one small part.

Of a loving family.

If he is lucky.

 

Tuesday, 31 July 2012

Reviews

[Kristopher d. Taylor]

The font is quite large, but easy to read, haha. Overall that is my only thing about this piece. I really enjoyed the freshness? of it, I guess thats the only way I can describe it.