Revelation.

Sonnet

Revelation.

 

When the harvest moon is full

And makes the night as bright as day.

I see the world as beautiful

Although in a different way.

 

To how it looks by bright sunlight.

I watch the subtle interplay

Between the shadows of the night

In their attempts to hide away.

 

From the effulgence of the moon.

They cannot hide although they try.

To me the brightness is a boon

Revealing beauties to my eye.

 

Which otherwise I would not see

 Wrapped in the shadows mystery.

 

Saturday, 03 March 2012

Reviews

[Muse]

Revelation is a renewal of spiritual hope and energy. Energy has powerful as the life giving sun. The moon also seems to create a new magic...especially the full moon. Light from the moon will always prevail through the darkest night...and this is indeed one of life's greatest beauties and mystery's.

[Ruth]

Stunningly worded love! You make words find a hue of their own, stunning! xoxo

[J. J. Nightingale]

REVEALING BEAUTIES TO MY EYE .. YOU DO HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS .. THIS IS A MOST BEAUTIFUL VERSE .. LOVELY ..

NICE .. DID ENJOY .. JASMINE

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TRES BEAU!! j'adore ca
The subtle rhyming in this piece is to me what makes it so enjoyable. It 'flows' so well (for lack of a better word)
So vivid, so carefully written.
A truly beautiful piece of art

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TRES BEAU!! j'adore ca

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I like how you used the harvest moon to symbolize how our perceptions of things change in certain light. Very beautiful.