One born every minute

One born every minute

A Poem by Poeticpiers
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Rondeau

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One born every minute.

 

Rondeau.

 

 

We may not see what is to be.

It is hidden purposely.

Although some  people claim they can

See ahead and defy the ban

I think that very probably

 Its only clever trickery

 to persuade the credulous.

We may not see.

The trickster pretends he can see.

Your future fate quite easily.

I have no doubt at all he can

succeed in fooling everyman.

Who is not prepared to agree.

We may not see.

© 2011 Poeticpiers


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I wonder if Barnum knew what it was he started when he said "One is Born evertday". Your flow in this write out runs my reading. I felt it needed something different to slow down my reading speed but it was full of rhyme and images. Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It is very true. The poem has great rytham. nice work...
:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I shall not argue with you! Great rhythmic piece..

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Poeticpiers
Poeticpiers

Near Durham city UK, United Kingdom



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72years, young married. Ex police officer Ex social worker. interests Reading and writing poetry Painting and drawing in coloured pencil avid reader,sci fi fantasy crime. comparitive religion and esp... more..

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